Hello again. I hope you all had a good week. Today we’ll be talking about touch and how ordinary objects can become extraordinary when described through this sense.
First a poem by Wallace Stevens: Thirteen Ways of Looking at a Blackbird
Isn’t it lovely how such simple images can take an ordinary thing like a blackbird and make it into something so beautiful? Which is your favorite of the thirteen? Mine is:
XI
He rode over Connecticut
In a glass coach.
Once, a fear pierced him,
In that he mistook
The shadow of his equipage
For blackbirds.
Ordinary Objects Exercise: Take an ordinary object from your desk (a pencil or pen, paper clip, eraser, etc.) and close your eyes. Study it with your eyes closed, trying not to focus on what you know the object is, but on how the object feels.
After memorizing the object for a few minutes, set it aside and write a short paragraph or two describing the object but using only the things you memorized through your sense of touch. You can use metaphors and similes but try not to use any of the other senses. Note how the sense of touch transforms the object into something new and different.










Call me Gabi (pronounced gah-BEE). I'm a writer, freelance teacher, and a lover of books and words. I'm also the instigator of DIY MFA. iggi's my sidekick, but he thinks he's the brains behind this operation.
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